Shoot details:
I like the contrast of the tunic to the warm colors of the background. It's kind of ecclectic and fun. I did not however realize how over-exposed the lighting made the pictures until I got out of the game. Though it's fixable, I think, in manipulation--or at least easily enough reshot.
Moon_0001
Positive:
It was an expression that very much said you to me. Kind of fun, a little silly. But not too extreme.
Negative:
The wrist pinches funny on the animation and the before stated overexposure.
Moon_003
Positive:
Neutral smiley pose, not too over the top, not overly bland either. I happen to like the way the hands posed, but that would probably get chopped off in an avatar anyway.
Negative:
Mouth open, some people don't like that. Not overly expressive.
Moon_004
Positive:
Neutral smiling pose, mouth closed.
Negative:
Bland, not expressive in the slightest.
Moon_005
Postive:
Not a smiling pose, not everyone likes smiling poses. Not to the point of crying in your beer, however
Negative:
She looks vaguely like she's about to throw up.
Moon_006
Positive:
There's something amusing about the expression here. It reminds me of Chip Diller (Kevin Bacon's character in Animal House) at the end where he's saying all is well.
Negative:
It reminds me of Chip Diller and he was pretty much an asshole.
Moon_007
Positive:
Action shot, she's smiling, you can see the whole face, the reflection off the floor adds interest I think.
Negative:
Action shots don't always make the best avatars, I'm not sure I'm too fond of the way the denim looks in that pose, it's grainy, though that's croppable. It's not very emotive beyond "happy"
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