Postives:
It's neutral?
Negative:
It's bland, like unseasoned minute rice bland, there's nothing here.
Positive:
It's kind of emotive, there's something there at least.
Negative:
Bottom teeth only (Not the best look,) and I don't like the way the hair mesh bends on the shoulders in this shot.
A better indoor shot, not nearly as over exposed, however there aren't a lot of shots in it and neither are particularly happy shots.
Positive:
There is some emotion here and I like the way the mesh frames the face.
Negative:
Unfortunately the emotion seems to be disgruntled. >_<' Plus I think the sleeve blends too much into the background on the right side. And she's not looking at the camera, her eyes are closed.
Positive:
It definitely gives emotion, eyes are open, and the face is expressive
Negative:
She looks completely PO'd Plus again the sleeve blends in.
These are outdoor shots. I do better with outdoor shots because I don't have to worry about the lighting so much and I rarely overexpose in day time shots. I actually rather like this hair on you, and the outfit is very much how I was planning on dressing you in my game at least. They're all doing something shots however, and because of that it was harder to control expression, you're rarely looking at the camera and the face is sometimes blocked at least in part.
Postive:
It's an expressive shot, the lighting looks good and the background is neutral so you/she stands out.
Negative:
Over half the face is cut off between fringe, pole and hands. Plus the fact that you can't see the line or the hook bothers me.
Positives:
Pleasant expression, smiling, no weird facial twists and it doesn't look plastic
Negatives:
You're not looking at the camera, The face is blocked in part by the fringe and you can't really see the eyes.